Hey people! I need your opinion! Going to be starting my email campaign and I cant decide which caption is best for this photo.
Lets say you don't know me and you receive an email from me with this picture. Besides the usual info:
"Danielle Hall Photography/www.daniellehall.net/415.793.3743" and my logo, it will also say either:
1. "You can take that to the bank!"
2. "He makes dollars but he don't make sense."
or...
3. "Corporate Raider."
Your vote counts!!!
Thanks so much,
Danielle Hall
i like you can take that to the bank. not sure why exactly but voting from the gut.
ReplyDeletewho is the target audience, agency, studio, possible clients none b2b?
ReplyDeleteits Art directors, creative directors, editors, art buyers
ReplyDeletepeople who would hire for print ads and/or magazines
if thats the case then you need something fresh and new.
ReplyDelete1. "You can take that to the bank!" is a no go has been used to death
2. "He makes dollars but he don't make sense."
maybe play on the words like "He makes dollars from none cents." cents/sense its more creative
or...
3. "Corporate Raider." sounds negative maybe something like," corporate innovator"
or inspirator
my vote ""He makes dollars from none cents."
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